Thanks for the criticism. This was the second game I made in Unity, so didn't really know how to do character movement but I still wanted to make a horror game. I can see how it didn't work for you though
this video has all itch io games i made video on in 2020 including this one. I also wanna say thanks for the game and good luck for future projects. #hellofajourney
This game was a terrific entry for the 2-Minute Horror Game Jam: it is simple, minimalistic, eery and above all, terrifying. I hate that you can't get out of bed to run or hide! The game forces me to act against my better judgement! I don't want to sleep because of the thing in the room that haunts my every waking moment. Great job!
MY REVIEW: from beginning to just before the end all jumpscares were good not that terrifying but yeah they were pretty cool and spooky. it did gave me goosebumps whenever i saw like the hand and the shadow. it was just like paranormal activity but pixelated . only 1 thing that i hated the most was the ending when monster pops up. u could have made a really scary human-ish ghost in the like human but completely torn or with heavy amount of wounds. well overall i loved the game, Thank you very much.
Thank you for constructive criticism! I agree with you about the end part: it definitely needs more work. I'm glad that everything else before it was spooky though!
I was very confused with what was going on it was a bit confusing at first and originally it was a bit spooky. But as it went on that feeling went away and it just became cliché and the "jumpscare" was a bit of a let down. You had a good idea if there was more time put into this game it could have been a lot better. So overall good idea but poor execution, I encourage everyone to play this on your own because this is just my opinion.
Good work! Keep improving :). Maybe when you go to sleep there's a timer, and if you don't press the button it automatically wakes you up? Good stuff, sound was nice!
A lot of things happened in those 2 minutes. This was a quick little horror game that I enjoyed fully. Thanks for the spooks. I included this game in a video which I will link below if you are interested in seeing my reaction. Gameplay starts at 26:17
I appreciate all feedback, negative and positive. I wasn't trying to make the game traditionally scary, more unnerving like you mentioned. I do agree that the ending could use a lot work. This is the first horror game I have made, so I'm looking to improve a lot. I'm actually making another (longer) horror game right now; I would love to see if you think I improved!
You've already started off great! I'm sure you will do great just based on your reaction. Although I didn't say that to get a reaction out of you if you were thinking that.
For me you certainly succeeded with making me a bit nervous.
The new game I am sure to try to play it, I assume it will also be in browser?
In this game were you looking for more of a springtrap jumpscare? From that one where he just does this scary walk up to the camera? That's a very scary approach for some people, but for others it might not work as well. For sure, I cannot wait to play the next game!
Interesting...but if that happened to me, my gun would have been drawn at the first sign of me knowing I wasn't alone when I should be. I wouldn't have shrugged it off and go back to sleep as if it wouldn't bother me. Again, it was interesting, everything including the noises were unnerving for that setting except the jumpscare. My personal opinion is that the jumpscare character could have been scarier.
Thanks for your feedback! I actually designed the game around the idea that you're hiding under your covers, but I rushed to finish it for game jams, so it turned out as "Can't Sleep". I agree with you about the jumpscare; this was the first horror game I ever made, so I will be improving things in the next game I make!
Pretty creepy, I like the monster's design and how the room gets messed up, but feel like the build up was a bit too fast (likely due to the 2 minute timeframe though).
Fun game! Loved the shadow person going behind the closet and the subtle other detals, even the footsteps when you close your eyes and the door squeak. Sent chills everywhere and was spooky. And the mechanic of having to close your eyes even though you know something might pop up was very well implemented and made it that much more spooky. Great little game!
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My Horror Experience:
Okay... this looks like a good game :D
Huh... alright, I'll sleep ;-;
*sleeps*
WhO oPeNeD mAh DoOr
:ooo A BALL
Well uh... sorry T - T I'm try'nna sleep right now
*sleeps*
Okay, where's the ball...
Oop- I saw a black thing behind the closet ;-;
*sleeps*
NOOO WHO HARMED MY DOOR q - q
Put the desk back - , - I spent like 2 hours cleaning my room today
*sleeps*
Okay... where's the closet now? T , T
StAhP sTeAlInG mY sTuFf OkAy >:O
Why did my screen go black = . =
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Well uh... I didn't have the volume on in the first place XD
it was so much better wt the volume and XD)))
Ah yes, but I'd prefer not to die at the moment
bro stop with all that ";-;" stuff
GAMEPLAY WALKTHROUGH (POSTED FOR LAST TIME)
noice
Good for you :D Hope you enjoyed it!
same
although I might be dead inside
I find being made artificially powerless with no explanation is just frustrating and alienating so it is hard to be immersed. just my opinion
Thanks for the criticism. This was the second game I made in Unity, so didn't really know how to do character movement but I still wanted to make a horror game. I can see how it didn't work for you though
I like the game! good job!
Thank you!
this video has all itch io games i made video on in 2020 including this one. I also wanna say thanks for the game and good luck for future projects. #hellofajourney
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This game was a terrific entry for the 2-Minute Horror Game Jam: it is simple, minimalistic, eery and above all, terrifying. I hate that you can't get out of bed to run or hide! The game forces me to act against my better judgement! I don't want to sleep because of the thing in the room that haunts my every waking moment. Great job!
Gameplay starts @ 26:00
It was a cool game maybe you could add more to it. It was that scary maybe make the guy at the end jump at you or something
Thanks!
MY REVIEW: from beginning to just before the end all jumpscares were good not that terrifying but yeah they were pretty cool and spooky. it did gave me goosebumps whenever i saw like the hand and the shadow. it was just like paranormal activity but pixelated . only 1 thing that i hated the most was the ending when monster pops up. u could have made a really scary human-ish ghost in the like human but completely torn or with heavy amount of wounds. well overall i loved the game, Thank you very much.
MY REACTION:
Thank you for constructive criticism! I agree with you about the end part: it definitely needs more work. I'm glad that everything else before it was spooky though!
yeah some horror games don't really need any monsters or ghosts. the scary activities in the game makes them horrifying.
l cant do
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I cant sleep nowThank you for playing! I enjoyed watching the video.
I was very confused with what was going on it was a bit confusing at first and originally it was a bit spooky. But as it went on that feeling went away and it just became cliché and the "jumpscare" was a bit of a let down. You had a good idea if there was more time put into this game it could have been a lot better. So overall good idea but poor execution, I encourage everyone to play this on your own because this is just my opinion.
Thank you for the feedback! This was the first horror game I ever made, so I'm trying to make improvements for my next game.
Well keep working and improving
Good work! Keep improving :). Maybe when you go to sleep there's a timer, and if you don't press the button it automatically wakes you up? Good stuff, sound was nice!
Pretty spooky. It's kinda funny how little your character cares xD
Yeah, originally I intended the mechanic to be hiding under the covers, but I rushed it so now it's sleeping!
I remember the movie Little Monsters (1989)
A short but fun horror game. Good work!
Thank you!
A lot of things happened in those 2 minutes. This was a quick little horror game that I enjoyed fully. Thanks for the spooks. I included this game in a video which I will link below if you are interested in seeing my reaction. Gameplay starts at 26:17
Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed playing!
Im Sleepy
Short but nice game
Thank you!
Ending leaves much to be desired in opinion.
As well as it wasn't really that scary, just unnerving around middle of the game.
It looked nice but wasn't well executed.
I appreciate all feedback, negative and positive. I wasn't trying to make the game traditionally scary, more unnerving like you mentioned. I do agree that the ending could use a lot work. This is the first horror game I have made, so I'm looking to improve a lot. I'm actually making another (longer) horror game right now; I would love to see if you think I improved!
You've already started off great! I'm sure you will do great just based on your reaction. Although I didn't say that to get a reaction out of you if you were thinking that.
For me you certainly succeeded with making me a bit nervous.
The new game I am sure to try to play it, I assume it will also be in browser?
In this game were you looking for more of a springtrap jumpscare? From that one where he just does this scary walk up to the camera? That's a very scary approach for some people, but for others it might not work as well. For sure, I cannot wait to play the next game!
Thank you!
Nice little game. Expected more of a jump scare, though XD (Game starts at 8:55)
Please check out the video and my channel: VladMan. Thank you!
Thanks for the video! I definitely need to work on my jumpscares; this is my first horror game!
make it fast i need a make video from it
Thank you!
your welcome buddy make more and send for me i very liket
Interesting...but if that happened to me, my gun would have been drawn at the first sign of me knowing I wasn't alone when I should be. I wouldn't have shrugged it off and go back to sleep as if it wouldn't bother me. Again, it was interesting, everything including the noises were unnerving for that setting except the jumpscare. My personal opinion is that the jumpscare character could have been scarier.
Thanks for your feedback! I actually designed the game around the idea that you're hiding under your covers, but I rushed to finish it for game jams, so it turned out as "Can't Sleep". I agree with you about the jumpscare; this was the first horror game I ever made, so I will be improving things in the next game I make!
Really cool! :)
Thanks!
beautiful
Thank you!
2 minutes well spend. thank you
here is a small playthrough
cool game! i love the suspense! my only advice is to spice up the monster design, then you've got yourself a 10/10 !
Thank you! I have no experience in 3D modeling, so this was my best shot in the little time I made it. I agree, it is quite amateur!
agreed!!
Awesome, thank you! I'd love to see the game you make! Share it here so I can see it when you're done
Pretty creepy, I like the monster's design and how the room gets messed up, but feel like the build up was a bit too fast (likely due to the 2 minute timeframe though).
It's the 3rd game I played in the video.Thanks for playing! I definitely agree with your feedback. This was my first horror game, so I still have much to learn!
I like how this 2 minute horror game is better than almost any horror game I have ever played!
Wow, thank you so much! :D
I liked it it was fun to play
the sounds and the details were so good !
Thank you! I worked really hard on on the sound effects
I enjoyed your game, especially the creepy details. The ball rolling in the beginning was very unnerving!
Thank you! I worked hard on that part :D
Fun game! Loved the shadow person going behind the closet and the subtle other detals, even the footsteps when you close your eyes and the door squeak. Sent chills everywhere and was spooky. And the mechanic of having to close your eyes even though you know something might pop up was very well implemented and made it that much more spooky. Great little game!
Thank you for the feedback and making the video; I appreciate it!
Really liked it, was just ominous enough to keep you on your toes, but also creepy enough to keep you scared.
Thank you for the feedback!
No problem, keep doing what your doing!
I love the idea of it. But i think the jumpscare couldve been better. Still a well made game tho!
Game starts @17:26
Thank you for playing! I agree about the jumpscare, I'm still very new to horror games so I have much to learn!